哪位大虾能帮忙解答这题。

机器猫 · 发表于 2012-10-31 09:47:58

She came to New York when she was seventeen. Because her older sister lived there and she was influenced by her sister.
a. fragment
b. run on
c. comma splice
d. choppy
e. correct
这题我觉得没有任何的语法错误，但是答案却是sentence fragment, 实在不解，请大虾们不惜赐教呀。
（难道是because句，缺少分句？）

123456789 · 发表于 2012-10-31 21:54:57

我认为，because不能单独成句哈，这句话Because her older sister lived there and she was influenced by her sister. 我们都知道and是连接两个句子，而because不能单独成句，所以这句是有问题的，你觉得呢？

机器猫 · 发表于 2012-11-1 17:42:28

123456789 发表于 2012-10-31 21:54
我认为，because不能单独成句哈，这句话Because her older sister lived there and she was influenced by ...

对，我感觉你说的对，按照你的意思，如果这句话变成because her older sister lived there, she was infuenced by her. 就对了，是这个意思吧。

juliezone · 发表于 2012-11-4 20:27:59

我觉得改成She came to New York when she was seventeen, because her older sister lived there and she was influenced by her sister. 这样更好

机器猫 · 发表于 2012-11-6 19:03:51

juliezone 发表于 2012-11-4 20:27
我觉得改成She came to New York when she was seventeen, because her older sister lived there and she ...

谢谢，高手。的确这样更好。

找方向 · 发表于 2013-3-30 23:15:34

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